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Sitting in the stain

And thinking of rain

We are to part again

Unknown to our meetings

Our affair takes place

Beyond the sounds of rain


Again and Again


Our loyalty is only a title

A title that is set in stone and paper

A stone can break and paper can burn

That is how we earn


Again and Again


If we where discovered

Beyond the sounds of rain

We shall be eternally damned


Again and Again
©2008-2009 ~detailedillusion
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Well I haven't done a poem for a while, because I have been extremly busy with my film.

This is based in perhaps the Victorian times, two lovers having an affair:) Hope you like it
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great stuff, love it :D

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a really cool club worth checking out =WriteandShootClub
Cheers man, it feels to me I haven't done anything in ages, always good to update:)
I lovet it! nice poem :)

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"...Hold on dreamaway
You're my sweet charade..."
Thank you:) Glad you liked it
ur making a film? wuts it about?

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BOOM BIOTCH! I SWANTON UR SRRY *SS!
Dumb Ass Questions Deserve Smart Ass Answers. XD
:) ... what kind of film are you working on?

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"...Hold on dreamaway
You're my sweet charade..."
more details plz!

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BOOM BIOTCH! I SWANTON UR SRRY *SS!
Dumb Ass Questions Deserve Smart Ass Answers. XD
Documentary/Drama Its about a hitman and his daily routines, and his thoughts and opinions on the things he does. Not the same one as the game or film, the main guy isn't bald, so it wouldn't never work haha. I'm just editing now, soo it should be done soon:)

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