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He Meant Well:


He grabs the gun


Blood dripping from the trigger

Pouring down to the floor

Like a fantastic distraction


He raises up his weakened state

And launches his arm


The burning whiskey

Covering his mind


Quick to draw pain

He staggers back

Knowing its in vain


He knows his done justice

His preached his sins


And was promised a new beggining

In another life

The flash of the curtains closing

Glimmers in his eyes


His done the right thing

His done justice



Knowing the world would be a better place without him


His done justice
©2008-2009 ~detailedillusion
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A drunk with no where to live or someone to love decides to end it, before he hurts other people in his angry state:)
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Wow great! Better than my suicide poem [link]
wow

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OMG...I believe people feel there is no other way, if they only see the light...I am not meaning religion..

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Thanks man:) Glad you liked it
Thanks for the comment:)
Yeh i was half asleep when i wrote this, yeh it is sad, but there are people who are lonely and depressed that slowly lead to psychosis, this guy just wanted stop himself before he cecame that man:(

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